An interesting report

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This is a continuation of my Bane: Prince of Bloodclan story
The story part here is awful, but i like the picture considering I drew this a year or two ago and have improved since then.

Scourge watched as some of the gathered cats took steps closer to him to look at his son. Bane was sleeping soundly uncaring of the noise the cats were making. The night was still young and all the cats there had no intention of leaving until they caught a glimpse of the new prince.
"You must be proud Scourge," a tom said.
"He's so cute," commented a queen.
"I wonder who his mother is," spoke a curious she-cat.
That curious she-cat was Blood, a dark ginger she-cat with a green collar around her neck. Blood was a very skilled warrior and was high up in the ranks of Bloodclan. She walked closer till she was a wiskers length from the tiny kit.
"Where did he come from Scourge?" She jumped back in surprise when Scourge hissed and tried to bite her face. She knocked into two other cats and landed unceremoniously in a heep.
"That is none of your business Blood," his voice was a harsh whisper, "All that matters is that I'm his father and I'm your leader. It dosen't matter who his mother is."
Blood got back on her paws and slunk out of the alley with a quiet "yes sir".
Once all the others had seen him and left Scourge was alone with Bane. He began to groom the kittens dark fur enjoying the quiet evening. At the corner near the enterance to the alley Bone standing gaurd in the shadows. His ears pricked when he heard the sound of a cat walking on the pavement.
Bone stepped out of the shadows blocking the entrance to the alley,"Who goes there?"
"It's me, Rag. I've come to make the evening report," the tom, Rag, said in reply.
"Come back later Scourge is resting," Bone said in a low growly.
"But it's urgent that he..." Rag tried to argue back but Bone cut in growling, "Scourge is with his son and you will not disturb them!"
"Leave him be Bone," Scourge said as he lifted Bane up and placed him in a cloth nest in the corner of the alley. Once he was sure that he was comfortable he walked out of the alley and stood beside the two toms.
"Let no one but me in," he ordered Bone as he passed him. Bone bowed his head and took up his post in the alley entrance way.
"Walk with me," he said and Rag obediently followed his leader. They walked down the street a little way and stopped in the open parking lot.
"What do you have to report Rag?" Scourge said as he turned around to face Rag. Earlier that morning he had sent Rag on a mission to spy on the cats from the city outside of Bloodclan territory to determine what the best attack strategy would be.
"The mission was successful Scourge. I managed to make it very far into their territory before a partol noticed I was there and i saw something very interesting while I was leaving their territory."
"Well get on with it." Scourge said.
"We have a traitor in or ranks. I saw Nail , you know one of the border guards, appear from a hole in the road and make his way into the heart of their territory. The cats who were chasing me met up with him and asked him to help them find me. I managed to sneak around them and went to the hole Nail appeared out from. It was a tunnel under the great roadway into our territory." After he told Scourge this he waited to hear his response. Scourge was silent for a few moments then looked Rag in the eyes and grinned.
"A traitor and the perfect way to infiltrate their territory, well done." Rag dipped his head in gratitude.
Scourge continued, "We'll deal with Nail the same way we deal with all of our traitors, after that my senior officers and I will discuss the battle plan. This will be interesting." Scourge turned away from Rag and went back to his son.